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...I still read it from start to finish though
1) the line "Like we're some homeless shelter" seems extremely out of character - i can imagine that kind of line from a grumpy father straight out of the 1980s, but not Sora :S
2)"Well, have fun COMFORTING her" Oh god, sexual innuendos?? Sora, I'm appalled -.-
Otherwise a good comic
1) i thought it's just how anybody feels when you hear that an unknown person is movin in your private home ( this is why sora overreacts cause he's not familiar with the situation)
2) ahem...this is harmless considering other parts
I dunno, I've always recalled Sora being rather at peace with whatever situation he's thrown into. It's one of the qualities I admire in the character. Still seems out of place for him to act so...obnoxious
And yeah I see you're point in that this is how most teenagers act, but is that behavior consistent with the game's universe? Considering it's a joint square and disney production; probably not.
I'm being very critical, but I thought it would make a nice contrast to all the positive feedback you've received so far
and in my story he's a bit older too again so it also affects his way of thinking a bit
of course the way i picture him in my stories dont fit the kh sora 100%, but i think it's interesting to see a slight difference sometimes
Also, did it seem that Sora's character in KH2 was MORE goodie-two-shoes than in KH1 or is that just me?